Leadership Inspired By Arts Education

Maximizing Feedback Practices Through Purposeful Conversation

An Arts Educator’s Guide to Maximizing the Impact of Feedback and Adding Additional Sustainability to an Essential Piece of the Creative Process

Photo by Jon Tyson on Unsplash

Photo by Jon Tyson on Unsplash

Think back to the time when you received feedback. It could be about anything — a paper, a project, a photo.

Got that piece of feedback in your mind?

Now, did that feedback prompt a clear course of action? Of did it prompt some head scratching?

Did the feedback bring about positive feelings that inspired a course of action? Or did it encourage defensive rebuttals?

As an educator and leadership coach, I firmly believe that the combination of feedback delivery and clarity is essential.

Why? Because this combination will promote greater impact and implementation of ideas.

During your next feedback session, consider applying these tips to not only enhance critical thinking skills, but to develop collaborative relationships with the person who has requested feedback:

  1. Purposeful Scheduling

  2. Specificity Through Factual Language

  3. Summarizing Before Moving Forward With An Action Plan

Purposeful Scheduling

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Block a time in your schedule for feedback sessions.

Make sure that you understand what the person who has requested feedback wants and focus in on those wants to give the most honest, authentic perspective.

When I first started teaching, I used to spend hours writing out all kinds of feedback because I assumed it was my duty as a teacher.

Huge mistake.

There is limited opportunity for conversation in this technique. Plus, the impact of the comments was determined on how much time the student devoted to reading the rubric.

Now I purposely schedule time for conferences and process checkpoints. Instead of sending a writing list of “things to do next time” back with the students, we work together to talk through their goals and their learnings.

This technique can be applied to industries beyond education. The open dialogue and engagement in the work not only promotes authentic conversation, but deeper levels of critical thinking.

When someone asks you for feedback, schedule a time to discuss the person’s intentions before and after you review whatever has been requested for feedback. Block a time in your calendar, free yourself from distractions, meet in a neutral space, and focus on the piece in question. Having the conversation before you dive into the piece will clarify the person’s intentions, prompting a richer conversation about the goals of the work.

Cautious Note: be realistic about the amount of time that you can give to this conversation. This feedback process can be game changing, but only if you manage your time properly.

Specificity Through Factual Language

Are you being specific with the language being used in the feedback?

Let me elaborate by providing a few examples from the world of dramatic education. In this world, students will often analyze dramatic ideas and present their interpretations in a presentational format.

After presenting, the worst piece of feedback a student actor could receive is:

I really liked your facial expressions. Good job.

Yes, the sentence validates the presentation, but gives the actor no information about how to move forward with next steps. There is some positivity in the audience’s response to the facial expressions, but no specificity around how the actor’s use of characterization or staging brought delivered the message of the piece to the audience.

Instead, I prompt my students to talk about a specific moment in the dramatic presentation and then use an example to link what they just saw to their critical thinking. For example:

Your use of physical qualities, including the shaking of the tablecloth, really made me believe that your character was nervous. Having these physical qualities during your characters’ monologue really heightened the tension in the scene and created more suspense for what was going to happen next.

The same level of specificity needs to be applied for next steps. An example of specific feedback that gives the actor information on how to move forward is as follows:

I am wondering if it would make sense for your character to add more dynamics to your dialogue to bring out your character’s conflict. Try to explore different volume levels when responding to others the scene to bring out the characters’ intentions.

The specific feedback statements provide the actor with a road map for moving forward. By using language specific to the situation, the actor can contextualize what works for the audience and what could be pushed further.

Regardless of the industry, using specific language and examples from the piece-in-feedback-question not only honours the work in front of you, but provides a clear plan of actions for next steps.

Summarize Before Moving Forward With An Action Plan

Before the feedback session ends, it’s important to summarize the key points in developing an action plan.

I often ask my students to develop their action plan using the three prompts:

  • what they will keep in the piece

  • new ideas to be adopted into the piece

  • ideas to be re-worked or re-consider

After reviewing the specific feedback statements, I then ask my students to create a realistic action plan including checkpoint due dates and look fors. These due dates and look fors are important as they prompt the students to not only consider the feedback, but they time they need to make choices to revise their work.

This part of the process always requires some sort of documentation. Whether it’s voice memo recording of the conversation or a paper handout, we will re-visit these conversations once they have had time to complete the revisions. Students must also identify accountability partners and document their progress in order to fulfill their action plan.

Most importantly, I always stress that feedback is coming from the perspective of the viewer and that the artist must make choices regarding how much change to incorporate into the work. Feedback is a solid data point to gather information regarding how others see the work. However, at the end of the day, the author of the piece must make the final artistic decisions based on what message they want to share with the audience.

I encourage readers to not skip the summary stage before developing an action plan. Sometimes the multiple feedback points can be overwhelming and might not benefit the whole nature of the piece. By engaging in this summary stage before setting an action plan for incorporating the feedback, everyone can set manageable priorities for incorporating the feedback.

Overall, everyone who puts their work forward for feedback should be congratulated. Receiving feedback is a vulnerable activity where one’s choices are on full display for constructive criticism.

By incorporating the practices of purposeful scheduling, specific language, and summarizing, it is my hope that the feedback will be more tailor towards your piece’s needs while supporting the wellness of the person who asked for the feedback in the first place.

This article is also published on Medium. Click here for the Medium link.

Globally Minded Education | Theory, Practice, and a Response to the 6Cs

This post is in response to Junior AQ (Administration Focus) analyzing the Fullen article with a SWOT lens.


"Students are the agents of change."  But we, as an educational community, need to work together to sow the seeds of globally minded education.  

In Michael Fullen's article, "Why Helping Humanity Should Be Core to Learning," he states that students are, "catalysts for changing teaching and learning; they are also partners in changing the school and forces for change in society itself."  

Students wanting to do "good", studying humanity to make positive changes in their environment, is nothing new.  The motivation to do good is wired in our DNA, inherent in our nature.  A perfect example is my two-year-old niece and her desire to help with any task.  

My two-year-old niece also knows how to make Facetime calls. An example of how technology and connections dictate our behaviour in 2018.  Hence the need to look at the 6Cs as a foundation for education, focusing on the following as a foundation for navigating the world:  character education, citizenship, collaboration, communication, creativity and critical thinking. 

According to Fullen, teachers play an essential role, "helping students focus, giving them scope to engage with each other, examining learning designs, assessing results and deriving lessons for improving learning."   By focusing on learning, and looking at the process of how students learn and make meaning of their learning, the lessons can speak to these skills, and not only the memorization of concepts.  

The strength of looking at education through the lens of helping humanity as a core learning concept is that we are developing students with self, group, and global reflection skills.  In our connected world, students need to be able to analyze what is being presented.  High-quality resources, such as the World's Largest Lesson, will provide educators with adaptable lesson plans around globe key issues, such as hunger, poverty, and access to clean water.  An example of a lesson, Hunger is Not a Game, is available by clicking here.  

A potential weakness and/or threat to the notion of educating the whole child is "theory vs. practice."  In theory, all educators believe that they are teaching transferable skills that will allow students to develop the 6Cs competencies and their notion of what it is like to be a human in our ever-connected world.  Yet, putting the theory into practice can be difficult or inconsistent.   To teach the 6Cs means that educators need to adapt lessons to explicitly meet the 6Cs.   The barrier to this is a fixed mindset around "transferable skills" and "curriculum."   All too often, we hear educators say "must get through the curriculum and get through the material so we can have an assessment."  I have had first-hand experience with a resiliency project geared towards student health and well-being where educators were asked to adapt the resources to their subject matter.  In theory, we created a series of tools that would make learning resiliency skills explicit within any subject - just needed adaptation from the classroom teacher.  Yet, not all of my colleagues saw the importance of teaching resiliency skills as the lessons took away from their curriculum and the planning took away from marking time.   In theory, we are aware that in order to have real progress, educators need to spend time carefully examining if their lessons are speaking to the core of who students are as people, allowing them to develop these important human skills through the lens of the individual subject.  Educational districts can support this work by granting release time, resources and access to successful 6C lessons and/or unit plans across all disciplines.  

The opportunity for enriched learning is huge.  The world is moving quickly, and the demand for digital literacy, understanding, and comprehension is high.  Using collaboration, visual thinking techniques, global resources and reflection, the community can work together to help students build their knowledge of the 6Cs, which will, in turn, help them reach out and help the world in whatever way they see fit. 

So, let's nourish the seed of humanity and use explicit strategies to grow the community's approach to 6C competencies, so everyone can benefit from the garden of the world.